|
PREPARING THE RESUME
Why the Resume Matters
A great resume can play a central role in launching your career.
It can make the difference in getting a competitive internship,
in landing a first job after college, in winning a scholarship,
and in getting into a competitive graduate program.
Your resume
performs several important functions for you in a job search
or in applying to graduate school. It represents you when
you can't be there, both before and after any interviews.
It helps interviewers know
what to talk about with you during interviews.
It lets the interviewer
know what you have done, what you think you can do, and what
you think is important.
Perhaps its most important
function is getting you an interview in the first place. The
time it takes to write a good resume is time well spent. This
is an important life skill to master, as it will come up again
and again. Being able to catalogue your accomplishments relevant
to someone else's needs will be a continuing career advantage.
Economists predict that your generation will have more jobs and
more employers than any prior generation. Even if you stay with
the same employer, you will want to be able to represent your
accomplishments to get favourable performance reviews, win raises,
and compete for the most coveted assignments. In this module
we're going to learn an easy way to write a persuasive, targeted
resume.
You don't need to be a
skilled writer or a business major or an honours student to do
a great job. You just need to think logically and follow the
directions that follow. Some Guidelines for Resume Writing Here
are the guidelines for good resume writing.
* You must tell the truth.
* It is your job to sell
yourself.
* A resume is about your
future, not your past.
* You put the information
in order of interest to your reader.
You must tell the truth
in your resume.
That's not negotiable. It is simply unethical to invent any part
of your background. Besides, employers find it very easy to verify
the basic facts on any resume, especially your title, dates of
employment, prior salary history, and your major and degree.
If you do find a job, you won't have any job security. Most employers
will dismiss employees, even years later, if they are discovered
to have lied on their applications. Remember, your resume, and
everything on it, becomes part of your permanent personnel file.
Being creative and persuasive are expected, but a fabrication
on your resume is a grievous mistake.
A resume is no place
for modesty. Employers will expect you to scour your entire background
and let them know what skills, abilities, talents, traits, and
experiences you have relative to their needs. They will not expect you to hold
back. You are doing them a favour if you put your best foot forward,
because they are looking at your resume specifically to discover
your talents and abilities. Think about it. If you have
trouble claiming your accomplishments, imagine what someone else,
who likes you a lot, would say about you. What would your best
friend, sister, mom, dad, favourite professor, or biggest fan
say about you? That's what belongs on your resume. Just make
sure it's all true.
Most students have much
more to offer than they realize. You've got to stop thinking
about employment and start thinking about experience. We'll learn
in a moment how to wring the most, resume-wise, from student
activities, travel, volunteer work, and so on. Finally, a good
resume is focused toward your future. As much as possible, the
information should be in order of interest to your reader. It
should be customized to the needs of each application, whether
that is a graduate program or an internship or a job opportunity.
Ultimately, you should plan on customizing your resume every
time you use it. So a resume should be designed to help create
the future you want, not just report your past. This is why we
start working on your resume not by compiling information from
your past, but by imagining your future.
STEP 1 Imagining Your Future
What future is your resume
supposed to help you create? Is it supposed to help
you get into a business-to-business sales position where you
think you'll wear a suit every day? Or is it supposed to help
you land a position with a non-profit organization providing
services directly to indigents in a distressed urban setting?
Or will you be seeking opportunities as a technology specialist, where you expect to
be able to work all night whenever you happen to feel like it?
Each of these is a distinctly
different future and would require a distinctly different resume.
Perhaps you don't know much about your future. Many students
prepare resumes to meet class requirements or in order to prepare
for career counselling sessions, and so on, without really knowing
what they want after university. This is not a problem, but even
if this is your case, you may have a hint or an inkling of where
you're headed. Following are a few questions to ask yourself.
Possible Careers, Functions,
Industries, and Job Titles Even if you have a crystal clear vision
of the career you want after college, and especially if you don't,
answer all the following questions in a notebook or journal:
What are your career fantasies?
When you imagine cool jobs
that you might like to do, what are they?
See if you can list ten
or more careers you've daydreamed about.
Who do you admire?
You can make a list of
celebrities and sports heroes and such, but then be sure to concentrate
on people you personally know or know of. See if you can list
ten or more people you admire, and then consider the careers
they have pursued.
What are you really good
at?
Have people always commented
on some skill or talent that you possess?
What jobs might utilize
that skill best?
List at least five things
you're good at.
What are you really interested
in?
What do you really like
to do?
What really gets you excited?
What would you do for free
even if you weren't paid to do it?
Of course lots of people
want to be an MTV reporter or a river-rafting guide, but suppose
you really like to talk to people? That would indicate that you
might like to start your career with a position in sales or public
relations or customer service. Make a list of five to twenty
things you like to do and jobs that might be able to feature
that talent. What do your career counsellors suggest? Career
counsellors are great sources of ideas for career directions
you may not know about or may not know much about.
Career counsellors can
also guide you to career aptitude and interest tests that are
fun and easy to take. These evaluations can generate lists of
career ideas for you and can serve as a place to begin considering
which direction to go in your future. What do people in your
family do for a living? Consider the career paths of your grandfather,
grandmother, aunts, uncles, cousins, and everyone in your extended
family. Consider whether any of these careers is of interest
to you. What do your parents' friends do? Have you discussed
their careers with them? Consider whether any of these careers
is of interest to you. What do your friends' parents do? Consider
whether any of these careers is of interest to you. Using these
exercises, you should be able to generate a list of industries,
functions, and positions that are of interest to you.
NOTE: Some people, the first time
they do these exercises, can generate lists of industries and
jobs but then aren't personally interested in pursuing any of
the careers represented on the lists. If this happens to you,
don't worry about it. This is just an exercise, and you can still
write a great resume. However, when you do know more about what
you want, you'll need to reconsider and revise that resume.
Your Values
What really matters to you? What is important for you
do to, or not do, in your life? Basically, a value is at the
root of almost any aspect of a job that is strongly attractive
or repulsive to you. In a career setting, values need to be considered
both positively and negatively. Positively, consider which values
you need to express on the job in order to feel fulfilled, to
find meaning, and to enjoy feelings of accomplishment.
Do you need to help others?
Express yourself creatively?
Earn a lot of money? Conduct original research?
Work on Bay Street? Work for peace and social
justice? Have public recognition
for your contributions? Join a prestigious organization
with a solid history?
These are all expressions
of values that one might be attracted to in a career. So, what
values do you need to express on the job in order to be happy
with that job?
Negatively, consider which values you need to
avoid expressing on the job in order to feel fulfilled. Would
harming the environment make you miserable on the job? If you
had to lie to clients, would that rob you of any satisfaction
you might take from other aspects of your job? Would wearing
a suit to work negate any other benefits an employer might offer?
Or would not wearing a suit bother you more? Consider what you
would not do or not give up in order to go to work in your future.
Consider these issues carefully, because one of the biggest ultimate
causes of career unhappiness is conflict between the values of
the employee and the values of the employer.
NOTE: Again, this is not an easy exercise the first time
someone attempts it. Be satisfied if you can understand the issues
and begin to consider what values are most important to you,
career-wise. See Yourself at Work in Your Workplace You should
now be able to imagine yourself at work in some possible future.
Where do you work? What work do you do? Who works with you? What hours do you keep?
Where is this job you want?
Is it in an urban, suburban,
edge city, rural, or wilderness area? What does it pay? Do you have flextime or
telecommuting as an option? What technologies will
you use? Is this a new or an old
organization? Is this a large or a small
organization? Is it a risky new start
up or a large and (at least theoretically) stable organization?
What kind of benefits does
your employer provide for you? What kind of people do
you work with? What is the atmosphere
at work on any given day? Do you work mostly independently
or is guidance always right at hand? Who gives you your assignments?
Is the work seasonal or
project-based or does it stay mostly the same year round? What does your desk look
like? Who do you see in a typical
day? How much travel is involved,
if any? How many hours a week will
you work?
Now, here
are the really important questions:
What knowledge, skills
and abilities are critical to performing in this position?
What kind of person or
personality would thrive in this situation?
What skills would be critical
for continued advancement?
If you were hiring someone
for this position, what would be most important to you?
You should be able to list
five or more things after each of these last four questions.
Take your time and perhaps work on this over a period of several
days. This is critical work for making a focused resume.
NOTE: Again, not all people who want
to write a resume will be able to complete these exercises. If
you give it a try and don't succeed, just proceed to :STEP 2
A WARNING ABOUT
ALIGNMENT:
Your career plans and the
rest of the vision of your future need to align. For example,
if you need an expensive house in the suburbs with a picket fence
and you want to dedicate your life to being a social worker in
the inner city, something is going to have to give. If you want
to be a successful entrepreneur and you want to work forty hours
a week or less, there's something wrong with this picture. Or
if you want to be a famous movie star but you don't want to leave
the neighbourhood, then trouble lies ahead. So when you get done
envisioning your future, take a moment and consider whether it
makes sense and is possible.
STEP 2 Considering What
You Have to Offer
After you have imagined what the employer (or
graduate school admissions committee) is looking for, your next
task is to survey your entire background to see if you have any
evidence whatsoever that you have the knowledge, skills, abilities,
and personality traits that they value. Consider your summer
employment, of course, but also consider part-time work (paid
or unpaid), internships (paid or unpaid), volunteer work, student
activities, community service, sports, travel, church/synagogue/mosque/ashram
participation, and everything you ever did in class.
For example, you may have
analyzed a job you are interested in and discovered that organizing
groups is one aspect of the work. If you organized a poetry reading
or an investment club, that would be clear evidence of your ability
"to organize, energies, and focus the energies of others
onto a common goal." If it is a critical task to speak to
others on the phone as part of your imagined future job, you
might list as evidence that you "worked the telephone help
desk as a volunteer for the campus computer centre during the
second year." If you are trying to win an assistantship
in graduate school that will involve teaching, you might remember
that you "tutored all grades of high school in math and
physics" as a part-time entrepreneurial activity during
university/college. Then, if you think harder still, you may
remember that you "presented a one-hour talk on string theory
to physics senior symposium, PHYS 485" last September. Be
as specific as you can about what evidence presents each knowledge,
skill, ability, and trait that would be attractive to your resume
reader.
Print out or electronically
copy the following table and fill it out until you run out of
ideas, then show it to a friend. Often, a friend's fresh perspective
will help you double the amount of evidence that you have to
present to a potential employer or grad school. Now print out
or electronically copy the following form, and fill it out to
create the raw data you will use to construct your resume. Writing
tips: * Use an exact figure whenever you can. That is, tell exactly
how many people, dollars, departments, arrests or whatever were
involved. Never write "Organized SummerFest" when you
can write "Organized SummerFest, an event drawing 5,000
students to participate in 17 alcohol-free activities, total
budget of $23,600, all-volunteer staff of 35." * Use a superlative
whenever you can. Report if you were the first, only, best, fastest,
largest, or most. For example, you can say, "SummerFest
was the largest student-planned event in the history of the alcohol
awareness program."
* Be accurate in reporting
your skills, but report all of them. For example, when
it comes to computer applications, report the programs you have
mastered, but also report the ones you have "some exposure
to." Likewise, with foreign languages, report your skill
in categories such as "fluent," "proficient,"
"can read but not speak," and "basic." You
don't want to oversell your abilities, but you don't want to
leave anything out, either.
Knowledge, skill, ability, or trait desired by employer or grad school |
 |
Evidence that you possess the knowledge, skill, ability, or trait |
|
Basic Background Information
Your name:
Your school address:
-Street -city -province
-postal code -phone -fax -cell -email Your permanent address: -street -city province -postal
code -phone -fax -cell -email Any friends or family members living
near where you want an internship or job: College you are in
now: -type of degree expected -date of (expected) graduation -major
-minor or secondary academic emphases -GPA (if particularly high) -activities -honours -awards -sports Prior college: -type of degree pursued -dates attended -major -minor or secondary academic
emphases -activities -honours -awards
-sports High school: -date of graduation -academic interests
-activities -honours -awards -sports
List of community service:
List of honours and awards
not mentioned with schools above:
List of places you have
travelled to (cities and/or countries):
List of sports you've played
not mentioned with schools above:
Hobbies and activities
not mentioned above:
Computer skills (all hardware,
software, languages, development tools, applications):
Other equipment you can
operate:
Professional licenses and
credentials:
Professional and/or academic
organizations:
Academic meetings attended:
Publications:
Classroom presentations:
Languages you speak or
read or understand, for better or for worse:
Famous people you know:
Special talents not mentioned
elsewhere:
Major research projects
or other types of major projects from your college career:
Experience of Interest
to Your Reader Now, print out or electronically copy the following
table and fill it out for each "job" you've had, with
emphasis on those jobs that indicate you have the desired knowledge,
skills, abilities, and traits. Remember that a "job"
may include full- or part-time employment, volunteer or community
service, a leadership role in a student organization, an unpaid
role as a teaching assistant for a class, ad infinitum. Every
time you had a promotion or a major reassignment of duties, treat
it like a separate job and fill out a separate form.
|
Experience Listing
Organization:
City and province:
Dates of involvement:
Your title:
Your supervisor's title:
Anyone who reported to you or that you supervised, even if it was informal:
Your duties:
Your contributions above and beyond the daily routine:
Any travel:
Any special training or skills that you had to teach yourself:
Any special recognition:
How did you leave the situation better than you found it:
|
Finally, students tend to forget some of the skills that post-secondary education is specifically designed to inculcate. Perhaps because many of
your peers have these same skills, you overlook them. Nevertheless,
here are a few examples. These are not provided as a list
for you to check off, but to stimulate your thinking one more
time about skills you possess as a result of succeeding in college.
* The ability to work on
your own, with limited supervisory input.
* The ability to meet deadlines.
* The ability to read and
summarize written material.
* The ability to persuade
others, orally and in writing.
* The ability to deal with
incomplete data sets, and to make decisions with incomplete or
ambiguous data.
* The ability to teach
yourself new computer programs from the documentation alone.
* The ability to work on project teams.
* The ability to conduct
original research using multiple resources (library, Web, telephone
interviews, etc.). Think what skills such as these that you bring
to the table, and list them in your notebook or journal.
STEP 3 Constructing
Your Resume Piece by Piece
Now that you have some
idea of what your reader is looking for and what you have to
offer, you can construct a basic business resume. We're going
to approach this project the easy way: piece by piece. Then,
we'll consider adding some of the more common bells and whistles,
such as an objective, profile, or list of special projects. Finally,
we will briefly consider alternate forms such as scannable and
electronic versions. This tutorial is designed to develop a standard
resume quickly. This is a straightforward and conservative style,
and there are many alternative styles. Set your margins for one
inch all around, and set the default font size at 11or 12. Choose
a common font, such as Helvetica or Times Roman. Now we begin.
The Heading Place your
name in the middle of the page, in size 16 bold type. It's a
good idea to use your full legal name, as in:
Catherine Ann Johnson
If everyone you know calls you by a nickname, you can include
it in quotations, like this:
Theobald Harrison "Wally"
Wallace If your gender may not be evident to your reader, consider
placing a small "Mr." or "Ms." in parentheses
after your name, like this:
Carroll Ward (Mr.)
Then, place your
mailing address, phone number, email and Web address as demonstrated
below. Many students will choose to list more than one address.
In particular, if you are about to graduate, you will want to
list a permanent address. An employer may try to contact you
a year or even more after you submit a resume. Be sure to extend
your college email account as long as you can. If you can list
a permanent or temporary address near the job or graduate school
you're contacting, that may also be beneficial. You can use a
friend's or family member's address by placing "c/o"
in front of their family name. Finally, any phone number
you use during a job search or during the application season
to graduate school should have a business-like message, with
your first and last name mentioned clearly.
|
Gabriella Marcella Garza
email: gmg33@student.sfu.ca
or ggarsa33@yahoo.ca
Web page: www.sfu.ca/students/gmg33/web-res
cell phone w/ voicemail
and pager: (604) 555-1685
|
west coast address
Student Box 1387
Simon Fraser University
Burnaby, BC V5A 1S6
voice: (604) 555-3185
|
permanent address
1243 SW 18th Street
Toronto, ON M5S 1A1
voice: (416) 555-8395
fax: (416) 555-8304
|
east coast address
c/o Mercer
44 West Ocean Dr., Apt. R-12
Halifax, NS B3H 3J5
message only: (902) 555-3018
|
[the body of the resume begins here]
|
Of course your address
does not need to be as complicated as all that, but the easier
it is to reach you the more likely you'll be reached. The Education
Listing On student resumes, education is usually listed before
experience. If you went to five undergraduate colleges and universities,
it's usually a good idea to list just the one granting your degree
(unless one of the others is particularly prestigious, or in
the neighbourhood where you will be applying for a job or internship).
If your degree is not completed, write that your degree is "expected"
on a certain date, or you may just list that date in brackets
I.e.: (June 2002).
If that date seems enormously
far off in the future, another choice is that your degree program
is "ongoing." Although you can use the standard abbreviations
for your degree, it will likely sound like more of an accomplishment
spelled out, Bachelor of Arts as opposed to B.A., Bachelor of
Science instead of B.S., and Bachelor of Fine Arts sounds stronger
than B.F.A. List the major if it would be attractive to your
reader, but not if it detracts from your candidacy.
Listing your GPA is not
necessary, although if you may wish to if it is particularly
high. Additionally, you can report honours, awards, activities,
and coursework relevant to your intended reader. With honours,
awards, and activities, your goal is to demonstrate leadership,
mental acuity, drive, teamwork skills, community-mindedness,
and similar attractive traits. With coursework your goal is not
to identify which classes you took, but what specific work within
your classes may be of particular interest to your targeted reader.
By using the word "coursework"
instead of the word "classes," you are free to list
work that you may have done within classes that had an entirely
different name. In other words, you may have learned about "e-Commerce
and B2B Portal Design" in a class titled, "Small Business
IT Solutions." It's a lot more pertinent to list the knowledge,
skill, or ability that the company is most interested in, rather
than the name of a class. Describe two or three relevant course
work scenarios that pertain to the job in question. Do not, however,
take this as an invitation to list skills you do not really possess.
If you didn't grasp the material, you cannot mention it. Remember
that you are listing relevant education, that is, education of
interest to your potential employer. Sometimes you will want
to omit information entirely if it is simply not relevant to
your reader. If you went to stenography school for a year, then
decided to study brain surgery after all, it's probably a good
idea just to omit reference to the unrelated studies. Here are
four examples. Model your education listing after these.
Remember, this is your
first draft effort, and you can change it later. Note that sometimes
it is attractive to put some of the details in a smaller type,
as in some of the examples below, but this is certainly an optional
design choice.
|
Queen's University
B.A., Economics (GPA: 3.66/4.0)
|
Kingston, Ontario
May 2001
|
|
Honours:
|
|
Dean's List (four semesters)
|
Ontario scholar
|
Test Proctor
|
|
Coursework:
|
|
History of Bubble Economics
Theories of Economic Modeling
Pricing & Valuation
|
Macroeconomic Forecasting
Business Law
Challenges of Deflation
|
Globalization
The Banking System
Consulting Practices
|
|
Activities:
|
|
Entrepreneur's Club - Treasurer (elected)
Student Senate - Treasurer (appointed)
Finance Club
The Queen's Investment Pool - Founding Member (23% annual return)
|
|
|
Queen's University
B.S., Computer Science minor in Mathematics
|
Kingston, Ontario
May 2001
|
|
Honours:
|
|
GPA in computer science, 3.82; GPA in mathematics, 4.0; GPA overall 3.35
|
|
Areas of Academic Emphasis:
|
|
Artificial Inteligence
Fuzzy Logic
Neural Networks
|
Theoretical Physics
Game Theory
Epistemology
|
Brain Psychology
Cognitive Psychology
History of Science
|
|
Activities:
|
Montreal Marathon (twice)
Tutor, mathematics, Wilfred Laurier High School, Ottawa, Ontario
|
|
|
B.A., Political Science, Queen's University, Kingston, Ontario
|
May 2001
|
|
Coursework Included:
|
|
Microeconomics
Macroeconomics
|
Research Methodologies in the Social Sciences
Issues in International Trade
|
|
Activities:
|
Co-wrote the revised Student Senate election procedures, adopted 1990
Organized retirement party for Prof. J. Solinski
Teaching Assistant to Prof. R. Taylor's "Introductiion to the Political Sciences."
|
|
|
Queen's University
Candidate for the Bachelor of Business Administration
|
KIngston, Ontario
2003
|
|
Areas of Interest:
|
International Business / International Trade
|
|
Special Projects:
|
Conducted research into the relationship between global trade patterns
and shared languages, resulting in a predictive formula for the cash value of the bias
for a trading partner with a shared language.
Prepared a five-year pro forma financial forecast for a restaurant chain involving
various scenarios for expansion.
Delegate, International Trade Association Student Forum, Boston, 2000.
|
|
Of course, your listings
don't need to be as fancy as these examples, but it's usually
best to write long on your first draft and worry about how to
make it all fit on your second draft. The Experience Listing
The most important thing to remember about the experience listing
is that you can list any relevant experience that establishes
you have the background the employer is seeking. The key word
is "experience," not "employment." So consider
your full-time paid experiences, of course, but also remember
to consider your part-time and unpaid experiences of all types,
as well. If you filled out the forms properly in STEP 2, you
already have an excellent catalogue of relevant experience. Experience
listings are usually listed in reverse chronological order, which
means that your most recent experience will be listed first.
Because of this convention, if you want to put your best material
forward in the resume, you may choose to divide your experience
listing into parts, such as "Related Experience"
and "Additional Experience," or "Professional
Experience" and "Student Employment," or "Teaching
Experience" and "Other Experience," or "Sales
& Marketing Experience" and "Additional Business
Experience."
The guideline to follow
is this: Put the
information in order of interest to your targeted reader. Anything
that establishes that you have the knowledge, skills, abilities,
or personality traits that an employer is seeking should be featured
before other experiences that do not establish these points quite
as well. Some students will even place headings down the left
margin to alert the resume reader to what is important about
the experience listed to the right. Highlights such as "leadership"
or "sales" or "accounting" or "writing"
help a reader to notice these aspects of an experience listing.
See below for examples of this technique.
Throughout your resume
you should follow the peculiar conventions of "resume English."
Write the resume in the first person, but omit first-person pronouns
such as "I" or "we." It is understood that
"I" is the subject of most sentences. Use the active
voice; avoid such constructions as "duties included"
or "was responsible for." Instead, start your sentences
with action verbs such as "created," or "launched"
(see list below).
Finally, verb tenses should
be accurate. If you are reporting something that you continue
to do, use the present tense; if you are discussing an accomplishment
or task that has been completed, use the past tense. These rules
will be easy to follow if you use the examples as your guide
and write naturally. An intelligent resume writer will focus
on accomplishments. Although many entry-level jobs provide few
opportunities to make major contributions, a little extra effort
here can really spice up your presentation.
As a humorous but facetious
example, if you are assigned to sweep the dock and you switch
from a 10" broom to a 12" broom, you have "contributed
to a 20% increase in productivity." Generally, you will
want to favour "hard" accomplishments and contributions
over "soft" accomplishments and contributions. "Hard"
accomplishments are quantified and easily verified, such as "sold
17% more widgets than any other rookie." "Soft"
accomplishments are real and important, but less quantifiable
and less easy to verify, such as "improved account loyalty"
or "improved morale on the project team." Also consider
your basis for comparison. You can compare your performance to
other new hires or to everyone in the department, for example,
or to the numbers from last year or the projected numbers for
this year, and so on. You can report your effort in dollars,
pounds, units, or percentages. Think hard about the best way
to accurately report your contributions. Some creative attention
to your contributions will result in a much better resume. Just
remember to be 100% honest. If a resume reader discovers a lie,
or comes to believe that you are overstating your abilities,
your resume will be the opposite of effective.
Remember, you can use such
qualifiers as "co-managed," "contributed to,"
"partially responsible for," and "some exposure
to" to squeeze every ounce out of your background without
overstating it. Start the listings with the name of the company,
the city, the dates, and your title. If your title doesn't tell
much about your job, you can add a functional title in parentheses
after you list your official title, like this:
Student Worker
II (Assistant Manager of the Undergraduate Chemistry Lab)Sometimes
it is useful to depict the type of company involved if it will
matter to your reader. Thus "Eoff Industries" might
be described as "a $12 million plastics extrusion plant"
if you are looking for another industrial opportunity, but not
if you were looking for a position in another industry entirely,
such as education or services. Be consistent! If you list the
city for one employment report, you have to list them for all.
If you bold your title for one job, you have to bold the title
for all. An inconsistent design is a resume faux pas of the first
order. Review the following examples, then choose how to organize
your experience listings. Once you have a rough idea of what
you want to feature, write up each experience in a format similar
to one of the examples.
You can change them
around later, so don't worry about the details and just get started.
Be excited about yourself! Let the reader know what you did
above and beyond show up every day! Here are some action verbs
to spur your creativity:
acted
activated
adapted
analyzed
assigned
built
chaired
clarified
commanded
compared
compiled
conceived
consolidated
constructed
counselled
created
customized
designed
developed
devised
diagnosed
directed
drafted
drove
enabled
energized
engineered
|
enlisted
envisioned erected
established
fixed
founded
identified
forecasted
generated
indentified
improved
initiated
inspected
instituted
introduced
invented
investigated
jumpstarted
kicked off
launched
managed
mobilized
moderated
monitored
motivated
opened
organized
|
originated
persuaded
pioneered
planned
prepared
prioritized
produced
programmed
projected
promoted
publicized
recommended
recruited
repaired
researched
resolved
restored
reviewed
revitalized
scheduled
solved
started
strengthened
surveyed
triggered
upgraded
wrote
|
Here are the examples in different formats. Model your efforts after the one that
appeals to you; you can change it easily later.
This first example shows how to list two jobs with the same employer. It also
shows how much mileage a student can get from a student "activity" in terms of
knowledge, skills, abilities, and traits of interest to an employer.
|
MANAGEMENT & LEADERSHIP EXPERIENCE
| |
Sigma Epsilon Chi, Queen's University
Treasurer |
Kingston, Ontario
Fall-Spring 2000-2001
|
| |
- Prepared and managed $64,000 non-food
operating budget for the fraternity and collaborated with national organization
to prepare the House capital budget ($116,000 in most recent budget cycle). Food
budget is handled through a separate process.
- Projected a budget with 3%
variance, the lowest budget variance in twenty years.
- Migrated accounting
process from Quicken to HousePlan, a much more sophisticated budgeting tool.
- Improved the depreciation projection system for the House by preparing a
twenty-year maintenance schedule. Used free estimates from local contractors to
generate the maintenance plan at no cost to the fraternity.
|
| |
Service Chair |
Fall-Spring 2000-2001
|
| |
- Reinstated the service mission of Sigma
Epsilon Chi, which had not been active for a number of years.
- Collaborated
with entire house on selection of family violence and childhood poverty as House
"challenges."
- Generated $3100 in two fund-raising events, and established
direct service opportunities with four local agencies focusing on the needs of
challenged families.
- Also indirectly increased the standing of the House
with university administration, local authorities, and local media.
|
|
This example shows a different style, with most of the information moved to the
right. Interestingly enough this style and the one above use about the same
amount of space, so it becomes an aesthetic decision which you prefer.
EXPERIENCE
sales
|
Queen's University Development Department
Capital Fund Representative (Alumni Outreach) |
Kingston, Ontario
Summer 2000 |
| |
- Represented the university's new Capital Fund drive to alumni
nationwide. Provided a range of appeals, including some fairly sophisticated
financial presentations, to justify increased giving. Learned to deal with a wide
range of individuals in a sales role.
- Selected to train other student
fund raisers on calling techniques, including best methods to handle different
types of responses.
- Ranked #1 on the student team. Offered a permanent
position with the development office upon graduation from Queen's due to
consistently outstanding performance.
|
| |
public relations |
Public Relations Banff National Park
Group Host |
Banff, Alberta
Summer 1999 |
| |
- Served as a park guide for groups, about 20% business, church, and
incentive groups from all over Canada, the U.S. and about 80% foreign business and
leisure travellers. Used French and Japanese language abilities on the job.
- Attended Betty Forrester's "Global Relations Training Program for Sales
& Service," a three-day intensive course on social and business protocol in
cultures all over the world.
|
| |
field research |
Profs. R. Cook and W. Stevens
Research Assistant |
Kingston,Ontario
Spring 1999 |
| |
- Conducted field research into consumer behavior
both by direct observation and by direct survey. This was an outside consulting
assignment managed by Profs. Cook and Stevens of the Queen's psychology
department.
- Trained in objective interviewing techniques. Also was the
only field research assistant who was invited to review the first draft of the
study for comment.
- Letter of recommendation available.
|
|
The following version shows how a student can combine a series of seemingly
different experiences into a cogent argument that he or she possesses the
knowledge, skills, abilities, and traits an employer seeks.
|
WRITING EXPERIENCE
|
Slam Poet and Promoter, Queen's University English Department, 1998-present
- Featured poet at six student poetry readings, including a rare solo reading
spring 2000.
- Promoted slam poetry as a performance art form. Tripled
attendance at poetry events and created campus-wide buzz about this exciting form
of live composition.
- Taught a workshop for all students on using live
composition to spur creativity.
Office Assistant (Advertising Assistant), Watkins Realty, Summer 2000
- Drafted all advertisements for houses for sale, initiating a shift away from
abbreviations and acronyms indecipherable to all but real estate professionals in
favor of mood ads, such as "Hard working professional? Pour a glass of wine and
sit in front of your own fireplace." These ads had double the response rates of
traditional ads.
- Also provided general administrative and office assistance.
Office Intern (Constituency Correspondent), Member of Parliament Diane Feinstein, Summer 1999
- Drafted letters in response to constituency queries and appeals. Wrote memos
and queries to government agencies on behalf of constituency concerns.
- Special honor: Selected to conduct original research and draft white papers
on topics of concern to the MP.
- Monitored legislation to ensure timely
and accurate communication of status of legislation in process.
- Also
provided general office support in a very busy, mission-critical office.
|
|
Again, your listings don't need to be as fancy as these examples, but it's
usually best to write long on your first draft and worry about how to make it all
fit on your second draft. Some experience listings, the least important ones, for
example, might be as brief as this:
|
Food Server, Le Commensal Vegetarian Restaurant, Montreal, Quebec, Summer 2000
|
Bells & Whistles
The most common bells and whistles on student resumes are a "Profile" or
"Objective," and an "Additional" section. When you know exactly what job you
want, an objective can convey that cleanly. Objectives and profiles go at the top
of your resume, directly under your heading. Here is an example.
|
OBJECTIVE
| |
A copy writing position with Altruistic Advertising.
|
|
This technique lets the reader know that you have prepared this resume
specifically for her or him. Try to avoid vacuous overstated objectives like the
following, which in fact come across to the reader as a list of demands:
|
OBJECTIVE
| |
A challenging and rewarding position with opportunity to continue to
advance and develop my skills with a progressive and nurturing organization
dedicated to eliminating poverty while preserving our precious natural
environment. |
|
Yuck!
A profile, on the other hand, is a list of the skills and abilities that you hope
to apply on the job. A profile is, in ten lines or fewer, an advertisement of the
skills you most want to utilize. "Profile" sections may be titled anything from
"Profile," "Strengths," and "Areas of Knowledge & Ability," to "Expertise," or
similar. Here is a typical example:
|
STRENGTHS
| |
Copy Writing and Editing
- Can generate a large volume of ideas quickly.
- Business writing experience in a variety of styles (informative, persuasive,
humorous).
- Mastery of standard Canadian and American business English; knowledge of The Canadian Style, AP
Stylebook, Chicago Manual of Style, MLA Handbook, Fowler's, and the other
standard usage guidebooks.
- Trained professional writer; able to function on
a creative team.
|
|
Of course, you can combine the objective and the profile formats, which would
come out something like this:
|
OBJECTIVE
| |
A copy writing position with Altruistic Advertising offering an
opportunity to apply my education, skills, and abilities.
Strengths
- Fully
committed to the Altruistic Advertising business model: "We do it for free!"
- Can generate a large volume of ideas quickly.
- Business writing
experience in a variety of styles (informative, persuasive, humorous).
- Mastery of standard Canadian and American business English; knowledge of The Canadian Style, AP Stylebook,
Chicago Manual of Style, MLA Handbook, Fowler's, and the other standard usage
guidebooks.
- Bilingual, English-Spanish. Can write advertising in English or
Spanish.
- Trained professional writer; able to function on a creative team.
|
|
Objectives and profiles are important when a resume has to compete with dozens,
or even hundreds, of other resumes. They tell the reader what's coming in the
resume to follow, and keep students from being screened out whose background is
not immediately applicable. When a student has guaranteed access to an employer,
however, objectives and profiles may have a limiting effect. For example, the
interviewer may have filled the copy writing job yesterday, and is now trying to
fill an account executive slot. In a case where a student has a guaranteed
interview, a safer objective might be:
|
OBJECTIVE
| |
A position with Altruistic Advertising offering an opportunity to apply
my education, skills, and abilities.
|
|
"Additional" sections on a student's resume generally fall at the bottom, after
the experience listing and may contain any information considered pertinent to
the reader, but not important enough to have been featured in the profile,
education, or experience listings above. "Additional" sections can be grab bags
of information, containing a reference to additional paid employment, sports,
hobbies, activities, honors, awards, foreign language skills, and countries to
which the student has traveled. If a student has only one type of information in
an "Additional" listing, such as sports or travel or hobbies, then the additional
section should probably just be named "Sports," or "Travel," or "Hobbies."
This section can also be used to convey a little personality, especially if the
rest of the resume has been pretty dry. (Note: hobbies are usually excluded from
professional resumes after you have a few years of experience, but they are
commonly listed for students and recent university graduates.)
Remember, you are presenting information that is intended to persuade the reader
to interview you for a job or consider you for a graduate or other academic
opportunity. So, if your additional information does not contribute to that goal,
leave it out! The image you have so carefully constructed above may be destroyed
by admitting that your hobby is "watching TV news channels with the sound turned
off," or whatever. Be prudent.
Here are two examples:
|
ADDITIONAL
| |
Knowledge of business protocol in Latin America and the Iberian Peninsula. Fluent
in Spanish; basic Portuguese. Travel to Brazil, Argentina, Chile, Portugal,
Spain, Japan.
Hobbies include translating science fiction from English into Spanish and
designing and flying novelty kites.
|
|
|
ADDITIONAL
| |
Additional experience in retail sales and customer service, gaining strong
interpersonal skills in addition to technical employment listed above.
National Outdoor Leadership School, 2000. Hobbies include long-distance hiking
(trekking) and wilderness canoeing. Marathon runner (one time; once was enough).
Available for unlimited travel and/or relocation for a company offering
continuing advancement.
|
|
(Just for the record, on domestic resumes, do not provide a picture, your date of
birth, place of birth, marital status, names and ages of children, height,
weight, or social security number. These practices were eliminated by about 1975,
so you'll look pretty foolish if you do.)
Other types of bells and whistles are lists. "Publications" would contain a list
of articles published, as well as articles "submitted," "pending," or "in press."
See a professor for the proper citation format for your discipline.
"Affiliations" would contain a list of the pertinent professional or academic
organizations of which you are a member or a student member. "Technical Skillset"
would contain a laundry list of your technical skills, such as your computer
skills or your skills with specialized laboratory equipment. If the lists are too
long, attach them to the resume and cite them as in this example:
It is not necessary to place, anywhere on a resume, "References available upon
request." This is understood; it's now considered old-fashioned to say this, and
it wastes a precious line you could use to better represent your skills.
Scannable & Electronic Versions
Optical character recognition technology has made major advances in recent years,
and most companies that scan resumes don't ask for a special version. However, if
you know you are writing a resume to be scanned, or if you wish to translate a
regular resume into a scannable version, here are the most important tips:
- Favor nouns over verbs. Human readers may be excited to learn that you "launched"
or "created" or "managed" but machines will be looking for "Linux," "Portuguese,"
or "artificial intelligence." This is true about all electronic forms of a
resume.
Web-based resumes present a different opportunity, however. For one thing, there
is no length limit. By using HTML, you can always link to more and more
information. Use links such as "For more on financial and budgeting skills, click
here." You can also provide a picture and more of a "magazine-look" layout, if
you want. Otherwise, the front page of your resume should pretty much look like
your paper version.
(Note: you can provide a picture on your own Web-based resume if you want, that
is, on the resume that is on your own home page; however, if you submit your HTML
resume electronically you must remove it. It is against the law for an employer
to seek a picture with a job resume, so most employers get pretty nervous
whenever one comes into the office.)
When an employer invites you to submit your resume electronically, you must
provide it in the requested format, whether that is ASCII, Word, RTF, HTML, or
whatever. The standard, like it or not, is to submit your resume in Microsoft
Word for Windows (commonly called the IBM format). If not otherwise directed,
this would be your best choice. Be aware that most employers will not open an
unsolicited attachment, no matter what you promise them is inside. If you send it
unsolicited, it's better to pull the entire resume into the body of the email
message.
Following is an example of a complete draft resume, assembled from the examples
in this module. The student's next effort would be to pare down all this good
information until it fits onto one page, and make sure the design was attractive
and consistent throughout. Best of luck with your resume writing efforts, and
remember, this is a life skill to master, not just a one-time task!
See example of a standard
CV below:
If you have any queries, comments, or suggestions, feel free to forward them to the author of this module: Donald Asher, Asher Associates, San Francisco, (415) 543-7130, fax (415) 441-0389, donasher@ix.netcom.com.
Donald Asher is a business writer specializing in career development and higher education issues. He has written three books on resumes, including From College to Career: Resumes for Any Major from Accounting to Zoology (wetfeet.com press, 1999), The Overnight Resume: The Fastest Way to Your Next Job (Ten Speed Press, 1999), and Ashers Bible of Executive Resumes: And How to Write Them (Ten Speed Press, 1997), as well as the best-selling guide to graduate admissions, Graduate Admissions Essays: How to Write Your Way into the Graduate Program of Your Choice (Ten Speed Press, 1999). Donald Asher also lectures on career development issues at colleges and universities from coast to coast. He lives in San Francisco.
This article was revised and edited for Canada by Anne Dyer and Martina Payette.
Ann Dyer is a Career Coordinator in the Career Centre at the Haskayne School of Business, University of Calgary. She has over 25 years of human resources experience, which includes recruiting, change management, organization development, training and development, labour relations, and wage and salary administration. Her HR experience is of great value to the students in the BComm and MBA programs at the University of Calgary.
Martina Payette is the Web Content Manager in the Career Centre at the Haskayne School of Business, University of Calgary. In her 10 years with the Career Centre she has coordinated on-campus recruitment, advised co-operative education students, actively marketed and developed jobs for the co-op program, and is currently managing the strategic development and implementation of the Career Centre's information and web technologies.
|